Snail

30 Oct

because, you know
as I creep up the hard lines
of your palm, I leave behind
a trail of me

and as you squirm,
try to shake me off
I cling on, sticky sweet
gleaming in the glory
of the fading light

you give up, watch
as I make my way
to the tip of your finger
and I think it’s done

I’ve won.

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4 Responses to “Snail”

  1. koshy October 30, 2009 at 10:04 pm #

    nothing i’d change in this one, works as it is

  2. nitt October 31, 2009 at 12:09 am #

    really good one

    • Geetanjali November 5, 2009 at 12:57 am #

      thank you!

  3. K November 5, 2009 at 6:30 pm #

    INteresting, all of them. The Snail has a level of spohistication that is good to see. More in person.

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